Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway)

Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway)

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01-28-2018, 07:03 PM

(01-28-2018, 11:03 AM)nibbed Wrote: I like the 2nd one best.
It's very visual with few words.
It's as though I am looking
from a 2nd or third story window.
I can see rooftops and all that colour!

-nibbed

Hi nibbed,
Thanks for reading!

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Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-27-2018, 07:25 PM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ellajam - 01-27-2018, 08:47 PM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-27-2018, 09:09 PM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ellajam - 01-27-2018, 09:22 PM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ellajam - 01-27-2018, 09:31 PM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-27-2018, 09:35 PM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by nibbed - 01-28-2018, 11:03 AM

RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-28-2018, 07:03 PM

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