Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine

Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine

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#17

02-27-2018, 02:25 AM

Hey Knot and Lithe17,

Thank you for your critique. Since there seemed to be a shift in flow after the second stanza I thought I'd just split the poem in two parts. Would like to hear your thoughts.

Also made a few tweaks to word choices and a title change.

Best, Alex

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Edit 7: Reflections in St. Augustine - by alonso ramoran - 01-23-2018, 06:45 AM

RE: Romanticism, Abandoned - by nibbed - 01-24-2018, 02:25 AM

RE: Edit 1: Romanticism, Abandoned - by alonso ramoran - 01-24-2018, 12:30 PM

RE: Edit 1: Romanticism, Abandoned - by nibbed - 01-25-2018, 01:55 AM

RE: Edit 1: Romanticism, Abandoned - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-28-2018, 03:50 PM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by alonso ramoran - 01-29-2018, 12:28 AM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by Knot - 01-29-2018, 03:34 AM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by RiverNotch - 01-29-2018, 10:38 PM

RE: Edit 2: Romanticism, Abandoned - by alonso ramoran - 01-30-2018, 08:19 AM

RE: Edit 4: Old Romantic - by alonso ramoran - 02-02-2018, 02:59 PM