02-28-2018, 08:40 AM
lovely journey back in time.. nice hint toward a double meaning with "firmament", makes the breeze even more relieving.
(the only place i stumbled was "frolic in". maybe take away the "that" and move "in" to the last line)
(the only place i stumbled was "frolic in". maybe take away the "that" and move "in" to the last line)
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