Beetle Wife
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(05-02-2017, 12:47 PM)wordgobbler Wrote:  ( I wrote this poem about an incident of domestic violence I witnessed a few months ago that left me traumatized, I am comparing the violence to when boys smash bugs ) 

beetle wife. smash her with thumbs and 
watch red ooze onto the skin. lick it off 
if you want, tastes like summer.                     Im not sure I understand these lines
antennas burned, shrinking like matchsticks 
wings ripped off and blown away with breath 
I am reminded of the meat market, plastic 
baskets full of raw meat bathed in blood              I like this, crazy imagery                 
the silence sprawls across us / my mouth is stunned
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Beetle Wife - by wordgobbler - 05-02-2017, 12:47 PM
RE: Beetle Wife - by Richard - 05-02-2017, 01:12 PM
RE: Beetle Wife - by tectak - 05-02-2017, 06:42 PM
RE: Beetle Wife - by LunaDeLore - 05-03-2017, 03:05 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by prettypoetry. - 05-03-2017, 04:39 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by nibbed - 05-03-2017, 10:37 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by 67eager - 05-09-2017, 03:21 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by FountainPen97 - 05-12-2017, 11:05 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by Achebe - 05-12-2017, 11:27 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by Wonderfullife - 05-14-2017, 02:39 AM
RE: Beetle Wife - by rymrkbstll - 05-14-2017, 05:45 PM
RE: Beetle Wife - by bernie99 - 05-26-2017, 05:51 AM
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RE: Beetle Wife - by Fae - 08-15-2018, 08:41 PM
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