Red edit 0.000001 leanne, river grudgingly:)

[tectak]

What I want to say 
is not as important
as the colour of a rose
that cannot see itself, 
yet is red each year
it blooms...but I find 
it difficult.
tectak
2018

The rose remembering to be red each year despite not being able to see itself, definitely puts memory as the quality that is the the principal subject of the poem for me. Is that why find it difficult to say what you have to say - because you forget? Finding it difficult to speak brings some other undertones as well, though. The ending seems somewhat weak at first glance, but given that this is a short poem, with a lot of the talking left to the reader, it works fine. Anyway, enjoyed reading this immensely.

....Hi ritwi,
....I was trying to create a punctuation paradox. Probably an element of sarcasm, too. I get weary....If you put a period after rose, things get modified...if you put a period after itself, things get modified....."yet" is without a condition....if you put a period after year, things get modified....It blooms but I find IT difficult...what is "it"? Read...sorry...Red... may be a short piece but I no longer feel best, tectak