Edit 3: On Actias

Edit 3: On Actias

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04-02-2018, 12:46 AM

Hi Knot,

Thank you for your comments and suggestions.

The title is a binomial name like Actias Luna. But as luna is moon in latin, somnium is...
This is a made-up species, granted, but it's to enforce the analogy that the poem is running with.

I completely agree, the tense confusion is no help to the reader and I hope I've fixed that in my first edit.

Best, Alex

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Edit 3: On Actias - by alonso ramoran - 04-01-2018, 05:03 AM

RE: On Actias Luna - by dukealien - 04-01-2018, 05:38 AM

RE: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-01-2018, 10:49 AM

RE: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-01-2018, 11:42 AM

RE: Edit 2: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-01-2018, 11:29 PM

RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by Knot - 04-01-2018, 11:59 PM

RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-02-2018, 12:46 AM

RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-02-2018, 12:49 AM

RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-03-2018, 11:47 AM

RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-03-2018, 01:12 PM