04-08-2018, 04:49 AM 
	
	
	
		I think my problem with the title is that I'm trying to make the analogy with the title when it should be done in the poem? Idk but my initial goal was to simply provide the perspective of the lamp and only hint towards the analogy at the end, with the title confirming it by the end of the poem. I'll put a spoiler below.
I'm not sure about the "that help you" either. I'll probably think of something later but I'm certainly more happy with how much more clear it is.
	
	
	
	
I'm not sure about the "that help you" either. I'll probably think of something later but I'm certainly more happy with how much more clear it is.

 

 
