Edit 3: On Actias
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On Actias

Your wings are greener 
than the faraway willow tree in spring, adorned                          
with tails, lissome as a sundown shaft of light,  
to elude a starlit maw. I glow alike  
 
and still you come to me. Is it because I have no mouth  
to devour you, let alone to speak these words? 
 
If I did, I'd only tell you— 
stay to the wall you're settled on. Do not draw too close 
like so many of the grey-winged ones who tap my skin until 
they go up in flares of light and dust. 
 
Get away. 
            Get away. 
Get away. 
 
You singed your wings 
and morning's here. 

Open speculation resides within the spectral nature of the poem, you have distended (def.) or extended the point of observation (the beloved)  to the endless horizon by rejecting your own desire, your own natural love    by setting her or him or the deity of the satyr or the cherub the seraphim the zephyr    the open sun and somehow shielded and WALLED your formal attachment to the mysterious beloved

In fact, the above is not correct (except for the shrewd maw and his apparent lissomity)

Imminent judgement awaits.   The correction of form.    The correction of love.   The gestation of living.




Definition of distend
transitive verb
1extend
  • the main outlines of the land yet lay clearly distendedbefore them
  •  —Norman Douglas



2to enlarge from internal pressure swell 
  • distendedabdomen


intransitive verb
to become expanded 
  • causing the stomach to distend
plutocratic polyphonous pandering 
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Edit 3: On Actias - by alonso ramoran - 04-01-2018, 05:03 AM
RE: On Actias Luna - by dukealien - 04-01-2018, 05:38 AM
RE: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-01-2018, 10:49 AM
RE: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-01-2018, 11:42 AM
RE: Edit 2: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-01-2018, 11:29 PM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by Knot - 04-01-2018, 11:59 PM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-02-2018, 12:46 AM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-02-2018, 12:49 AM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-03-2018, 11:47 AM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-03-2018, 01:12 PM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by alonso ramoran - 04-03-2018, 07:45 PM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by danny_ - 04-04-2018, 01:10 AM
RE: Edit 1: On Actias Somnium - by RiverNotch - 04-08-2018, 01:11 AM
RE: Edit 2: I Dream Moths - by alonso ramoran - 04-08-2018, 02:53 AM
RE: Edit 2: I Dream Moths - by danny_ - 04-08-2018, 04:10 AM
RE: Edit 2: I Dream Moths - by alonso ramoran - 04-08-2018, 04:49 AM
RE: Edit 2: I Dream Moths - by danny_ - 04-08-2018, 01:30 PM
RE: Edit 2: I Dream Moths - by RiverNotch - 04-08-2018, 10:50 AM
RE: Edit 3: On Actias - by Thunderembargo - 04-13-2018, 08:09 AM
RE: Edit 3: On Actias - by danny_ - 04-14-2018, 01:15 PM
RE: Edit 3: On Actias - by alonso ramoran - 04-17-2018, 01:40 PM
RE: Edit 3: On Actias - by danny_ - 04-18-2018, 05:17 AM



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