06-24-2018, 03:07 PM
Oi know the crit is harsh, but take what you will. i think you could narrow the theme of this poem much more or at least focus in; loneliness is an old topic. look forward to seeing what you do with
Lol stick around you will see much harsher. My Question to you is? You say loneliness is an old topic what does that mean? Every topic is old and I’m old and loneliness is making a big comeback.
I do appreciate your feed back thank you
https://mobile.nytimes.com/2018/02/09/op...ealth.html
Lol stick around you will see much harsher. My Question to you is? You say loneliness is an old topic what does that mean? Every topic is old and I’m old and loneliness is making a big comeback.
I do appreciate your feed back thank you
https://mobile.nytimes.com/2018/02/09/op...ealth.html
Someday the Mystery will be known 