Second Edit: To Emerging Poets

Second Edit: To Emerging Poets

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07-02-2018, 01:53 AM

Hey rowens,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm plan on letting this sit for a bit before attempting another edit. I like your point about the language needing to be more drunken.

Thanks again,
Richard

Time is the best editor.

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Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-15-2018, 11:15 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Knot - 06-15-2018, 11:11 PM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-16-2018, 09:43 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by nozaki - 06-21-2018, 05:58 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-21-2018, 08:51 AM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 06-24-2018, 10:47 PM

RE: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-25-2018, 01:59 AM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-25-2018, 11:30 AM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by nozaki - 06-25-2018, 12:16 PM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Knot - 06-25-2018, 10:03 PM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 06-25-2018, 11:26 PM

RE: First Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 06-26-2018, 07:59 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-01-2018, 10:24 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 07-01-2018, 11:37 PM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-02-2018, 01:53 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by rowens - 07-02-2018, 02:10 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by nozaki - 07-05-2018, 12:08 PM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-10-2018, 11:41 AM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Knot - 07-10-2018, 10:10 PM

RE: Second Edit: To Emerging Poets - by Richard - 07-15-2018, 12:09 AM

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