Summer Lateness - Edit
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(08-14-2018, 11:16 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  sure, syllables, but still: cut 'customary'

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Summer Lateness

August: paper leaves
fall dead of thirst, not Autumn’s
cool, discarding purge.



Thanks, a good place to start!  No leaves survive, but some less than others:   I'll keep trying.
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Summer Lateness - Edit - by dukealien - 08-14-2018, 10:21 PM
RE: Summer Lateness - by RiverNotch - 08-14-2018, 11:16 PM
RE: Summer Lateness - by dukealien - 08-15-2018, 11:10 AM



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