First Edit: Sailing
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Off into the summer day,
where the breeze will blow
our pallet ship, a blanket
knotted on its upright stick,
across the stream of time.

Off into the summer day
where the breeze will carry
our ship of a pallet with a
blanket tied around an upright stick,
across the stream of time.

This is one of my older poems when I first started writing. Not my best work but it caught my eye. Feel free to comment.
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First Edit: Sailing - by alonso ramoran - 09-29-2018, 01:13 PM
RE: Sailing - by billy - 10-01-2018, 09:56 AM
RE: Sailing - by alonso ramoran - 10-01-2018, 01:11 PM
RE: Sailing - by just mercedes - 10-01-2018, 04:57 PM
RE: First Edit: Sailing - by alonso ramoran - 10-02-2018, 04:07 AM



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