One Star in Site by Rowens

One Star in Site by Rowens

Lizzie Offline

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11-02-2018, 07:47 AM

The narrative voice is strong and compelling. October is the time in Mayan tradition when the wall between the living and the dead becomes porous, permeable.

The last two lines are magic.

Well done.

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One Star in Site by Rowens - by billy - 10-22-2018, 08:07 AM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by ellajam - 10-22-2018, 08:20 AM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by Richard - 10-22-2018, 09:24 AM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by rowens - 10-23-2018, 01:40 AM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by Lizzie - 11-02-2018, 07:47 AM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by rowens - 11-03-2018, 03:38 PM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by Miley - 09-20-2022, 06:26 AM

RE: One Star in Site by Rowens - by Wjames - 09-21-2022, 12:22 PM

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