Flow Ring
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Thanks Billy, I was thinking more unintentional wild fires, I was worried the 2nd would be incomprehensible but you got it and liked it... Maybe I can change a few words in the first stanza but the image seemed action packed, I agree on punctuation. Thanks again
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Flow Ring - by CRNDLSM - 02-20-2019, 02:20 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by billy - 02-20-2019, 11:27 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by CRNDLSM - 02-20-2019, 10:43 PM
RE: Flow Ring - by Knot - 02-21-2019, 03:19 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by Thunderembargo - 02-23-2019, 05:27 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by busker - 02-23-2019, 05:44 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by beccaannk - 03-11-2019, 12:27 PM
RE: Flow Ring - by CRNDLSM - 03-12-2019, 09:59 AM



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