02-21-2019, 03:19 AM 
	
	
	
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Hi CRNDLSM,
enjoyed the imagery and movement
in the piece (though will admit to
being lost on 'ring').
Just a cut and paste food for thought.
Flow like window flames licking
on white fingertips, lit. Fire lurches
onward whirling old woods
Ring in new goals rising. Idle
nimbuses gather rain, inch[ing]
next-generation roots
nearer greener ranges. Indigenous
noble gods, righteously ignited,
grow
Best, Knot.
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Hi CRNDLSM,
enjoyed the imagery and movement
in the piece (though will admit to
being lost on 'ring').
Just a cut and paste food for thought.
Flow like window flames licking
on white fingertips, lit. Fire lurches
onward whirling old woods
Ring in new goals rising. Idle
nimbuses gather rain, inch[ing]
next-generation roots
nearer greener ranges. Indigenous
noble gods, righteously ignited,
grow
Best, Knot.
.

 

 
