Flow Ring
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Hi CRNDLSM,
enjoyed the imagery and movement
in the piece (though will admit to
being lost on 'ring').

Just a cut and paste food for thought.


Flow like window flames licking
on white fingertips, lit. Fire lurches
onward whirling old woods

Ring in new goals rising. Idle
nimbuses gather rain, inch[ing]
next-generation roots

nearer greener ranges. Indigenous
noble gods, righteously ignited,
grow




Best, Knot.


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Messages In This Thread
Flow Ring - by CRNDLSM - 02-20-2019, 02:20 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by billy - 02-20-2019, 11:27 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by CRNDLSM - 02-20-2019, 10:43 PM
RE: Flow Ring - by Knot - 02-21-2019, 03:19 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by Thunderembargo - 02-23-2019, 05:27 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by busker - 02-23-2019, 05:44 AM
RE: Flow Ring - by beccaannk - 03-11-2019, 12:27 PM
RE: Flow Ring - by CRNDLSM - 03-12-2019, 09:59 AM



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