Flow Ring

[Thunderembargo]

Both inspirational and evocative.   The invocation of generational change and impulse through the turn of many well-linked phrases, each building, in successive genius strokes of a confident and pristine brush, a layered and dappled canvas, full of promise, hope and charge.   I'm not sure that I could add anything to it, it's really perfect as it is, but will attempt alternate phrasings in order to see the word-play reflect a different light.

Flow like open-window flames                Flame like open-window flow
licking on white fingertips, lit                  
opaque.  Whirling fire lurches onward       opaque.   Fire whirls lurch afore their opaque shadow
without fear, leading old woods              absent from fear, into the ancient forest
from long overdue winds.                     chased by winds, long overdue 

Ring in new goals rising.                                     Ring in gold, new silver goals rising.
Idle nimbuses gather rain intermittently.      [THIS IS BRILLIANT]
Next-generation roots inch nearer              Next generation roots inch nearer............. and deeper
greener ranges, indigenous noble gods      greener ranges, indigenous nobility of the native gods
righteously ignited, naked, growing.