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[Todd]

I really like this. Fantastic opening lines! I think it holds together to the end.

Best,

Todd

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The first time Mandela died
we were seventeen and drunk;

me on you and you on me
and both of us drunk
on a spirit only seventeen
could distill.

And there was still oceans 
of it.

And there are still oceans
of it
we cannot remember

now we are sober.