09-28-2019, 11:58 PM 
	
	
	
		“Was”  or “were”?
In my head, the read the of the lines without the “of it” and it sounds - maybe not better, but different. And I like it.
Lovely work
	
	
	
In my head, the read the of the lines without the “of it” and it sounds - maybe not better, but different. And I like it.
Lovely work

 

 
