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“Was” or “were”?
In my head, the read the of the lines without the “of it” and it sounds - maybe not better, but different. And I like it.
Lovely work
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1.01 - by Tiger the Lion - 09-27-2019, 12:34 PM
RE: 1.01 - by Todd - 09-27-2019, 11:33 PM
RE: 1.01 - by busker - 09-28-2019, 11:58 PM
RE: 1.01 - by Tiger the Lion - 10-01-2019, 06:10 AM
RE: 1.01 - by cloud - 10-01-2019, 02:17 PM



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