12-09-2019, 09:55 AM
i like this though think you could use a little more brevity on it.
it's a sweet little slice.
i think with something sweet, the crust and final slice it can be seen as a piece of pie
it's a sweet little slice.
i think with something sweet, the crust and final slice it can be seen as a piece of pie
(11-14-2019, 07:32 AM)Wjames Wrote: A sliver remains,
the final slice of pie
at the back of your fridge
beside a jar of pickles
you got the week you moved in.
The crust is soggy and the taste's dulled,
but it's nice to know something's there
if you feel like something sweet.