01-06-2020, 05:19 PM 
	
	
	
		Thank you everyone, I've followed Tiger's suggestion about the tense, and bb's suggestiong regarding the title - it needed more clarity.
Hopefully it better now, would be happy if anyone wants to share any further thoughts.
	
	
	
Hopefully it better now, would be happy if anyone wants to share any further thoughts.

 

 
