Old Flame - edit 1 (Formerly Faint Hope)
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Thank you everyone, I've followed Tiger's suggestion about the tense, and bb's suggestiong regarding the title - it needed more clarity.

Hopefully it better now, would be happy if anyone wants to share any further thoughts.
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RE: Faint Hope - by Tiger the Lion - 11-14-2019, 08:28 AM
RE: Faint Hope - by Wjames - 11-15-2019, 08:02 AM
RE: Faint Hope - by Ossey D. - 11-15-2019, 11:55 AM
RE: Faint Hope - by bbcashdollar - 12-07-2019, 01:50 AM
RE: Faint Hope - by billy - 12-09-2019, 09:55 AM
RE: Faint Hope - by Vikiirna - 12-11-2019, 12:48 PM
RE: Old Flame - edit 1 (Formerly Faint Hope) - by Wjames - 01-06-2020, 05:19 PM



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