09-27-2020, 11:40 PM
Nice edit. The second stanza works so much better now, I particularly like the specific detail of Hispanic workers which adds something extra to the poem. Also the last line works better now, it must have been the fact that it didn't rhyme that bothered me and not the sentiment which I now think works well.
Cheers,
Mark
Cheers,
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie
