11-03-2020, 10:39 PM
MelaniaStarHans,
This poem is cute. Cute is not necessary good. It is however a clean poem, just rudimentary.
There seems to be a disconnect around the idea of 'letting people into your mind' and if "they get
too close." Getting to close generally connotes an emotion, not a thought.
best,
dale
This poem is cute. Cute is not necessary good. It is however a clean poem, just rudimentary.
There seems to be a disconnect around the idea of 'letting people into your mind' and if "they get
too close." Getting to close generally connotes an emotion, not a thought.
best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.