01-12-2021, 04:15 AM
(11-29-2020, 01:53 AM)Wordsfrom1985 Wrote: How can I SAVE myselfHi David,
If I've already found myself lost
I'm RICH for your touch
In PROFIT of pain but love is at a LOSS
POOR old me
So hard to make a change
With just CHANGE in my pocket ...
With an old family photo
In a dusty old WALLET ...
@wordsfrom1985
David Smith
I also agree that the capitalization of the puns is taking away from the flow of the poem. Are they necessary? But other than that, I like the idea behind the poem
