03-04-2021, 04:15 AM
Thanks Knot, I agree with your point about the final line, and the too many ins.
I've been trying to move away from meaning and toward feeling in my writing, but when I try to finish a poem, I often end up still trying to shoehorn in some meaning to wrap things in a bow. I think I need to just write until I don't want to write anymore, and not worry about having an "ending" to the poem.
I may add more to this to improve the ending.
I've been trying to move away from meaning and toward feeling in my writing, but when I try to finish a poem, I often end up still trying to shoehorn in some meaning to wrap things in a bow. I think I need to just write until I don't want to write anymore, and not worry about having an "ending" to the poem.
I may add more to this to improve the ending.