05-08-2021, 09:16 PM
Thanks for taking this on, Knot.
Just to mention a couple of things regarding a couple of your comments: most important, the business about the abortion, the "he" was meant to refer to a previous lover. I meant to change that to make that clear; I thought I'd got the effing capitalization business consistent but obviously didn't (sigh); and Loris was mentioned earlier but only once. I was hoping the details, about Cathar for example, would be enough to get a picture of the man.
As to you final statement, not what I want to hear, but that's the reading I need
Just to mention a couple of things regarding a couple of your comments: most important, the business about the abortion, the "he" was meant to refer to a previous lover. I meant to change that to make that clear; I thought I'd got the effing capitalization business consistent but obviously didn't (sigh); and Loris was mentioned earlier but only once. I was hoping the details, about Cathar for example, would be enough to get a picture of the man.
As to you final statement, not what I want to hear, but that's the reading I need