Plain Songs from Tranquillity Base

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I do find the idea appealing (snapshots after forty years) but I don't think this lets readers in.

Thanks again, Knot.  Inspiration has dried up so this is a good time to go back to this one.  I'm going to go with your perked up interest in the snapshot idea and do some ruthless cutting and rearranging.  Clearly there are too many names, too many people to keep track of.  And I'll cut the Lalan and maybe the Tranquillity Base stuff.  Just see what's left.  

I'm thinking of a series of poems, one about each imprtant person, with some kind of bringing them together at the end.

Anyway, I appreciate the time you took with this one.