06-22-2021, 01:01 PM
I may be missin something with "Capitial" rather than "Capital".
Crndl's is crunchy, bunx's is abstract, but my bet is y'all can remake this into a legitimate haiku -- wonder what seasonal word would "marketplace" be translated into? Untouched, though, I'd just revise bunx's punctuation -- maybe colon on that second line -- while the crunchiness of Crndl's is just *mwah*.
Rowens's is of a different tradition altogether xD
Crndl's is crunchy, bunx's is abstract, but my bet is y'all can remake this into a legitimate haiku -- wonder what seasonal word would "marketplace" be translated into? Untouched, though, I'd just revise bunx's punctuation -- maybe colon on that second line -- while the crunchiness of Crndl's is just *mwah*.
Rowens's is of a different tradition altogether xD