06-23-2021, 11:21 AM 
(This post was last modified: 06-23-2021, 11:23 AM by RiverNotch.)
	
	
	
		I hope I was clear that it worked well, but without being tied to the seasons it isn't a haiku. I figured as much with marketplace of ideas, but I'd like to guess "Night Markets" or whatever are specific to this or that season, so if you really want it to be a "proper" haiku....well, that, a turn, and being a concrete moment. As I noted, the gist is probably too abstract to be a haiku, and there ain't nothin wrong with that xD
also, who's Philip? xD
	
	
	
also, who's Philip? xD

 

 
