Psy-Coma

[Bunx]

Mark and Tranquility- Thanks for the very helpful suggestions. Being as I woke up from a nightmare inspired to write this I was battling 3am bad grammar brain on a cell phone haha. I edited and took alot of the suggest from both you all.

Mark- I feel like the losing the reins on a carriage is a iffy metaphor for nightmares. That could be made more clear for sure.

Thanks for reading and the great suggestions