Rayuela* by TranquilityBase
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Well done, Tim. What sells this for me are the finely tuned details that solicit an emotional response and compell the reader to mourn along with the narrator. 
A gem. Keep them coming  Beg
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Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by Quixilated - 09-06-2021, 07:52 AM
RE: Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by busker - 09-06-2021, 08:41 AM
RE: Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by CRNDLSM - 09-06-2021, 10:34 AM
RE: Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by Knot - 09-06-2021, 11:44 PM
RE: Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by Tiger the Lion - 09-07-2021, 04:43 AM
RE: Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by busker - 09-07-2021, 11:22 AM
RE: Rayuela* by TranquilityBase - by Todd - 09-07-2021, 11:37 AM



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