draft 4: self-similar
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1.  The word art is very cool.
2.  It has a very surrealistic feel and I love surrealism.  Which isn't to say it makes no sense.  I understand it.  I really enjoyed following the words through the image behind the words.  There are many leaps.  That's the whole point of surrealism.
3.  Ending is superb and a delightful surprise.

At some point, after other people have commented, I'd love to know how you came to write this.
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draft 4: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-19-2021, 03:17 AM
RE: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-19-2021, 03:42 AM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-19-2021, 04:32 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-19-2021, 09:00 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-20-2021, 04:34 AM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-20-2021, 10:19 AM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-20-2021, 12:17 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-20-2021, 09:07 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-20-2021, 09:55 PM
RE: draft 3: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-23-2021, 02:24 AM
RE: draft 3: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-24-2021, 11:50 PM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-30-2021, 06:00 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-30-2021, 09:07 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by Mark A Becker - 10-01-2021, 05:21 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 10-01-2021, 09:44 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2021, 05:52 PM



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