draft 4: self-similar
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TranquillityBase,

Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it : ) Came to a realization earlier today that caused me to rework the whole thing, would love to hear which form you and others prefer but I have confidence in this form. As for the actual content, I'd love to hear if this new form has had an effect on the actual poetry.

Best, Alex
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draft 4: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-19-2021, 03:17 AM
RE: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-19-2021, 03:42 AM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-19-2021, 04:32 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-19-2021, 09:00 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-20-2021, 04:34 AM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-20-2021, 10:19 AM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-20-2021, 12:17 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-20-2021, 09:07 PM
RE: draft 2: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-20-2021, 09:55 PM
RE: draft 3: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-23-2021, 02:24 AM
RE: draft 3: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-24-2021, 11:50 PM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 09-30-2021, 06:00 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by TranquillityBase - 09-30-2021, 09:07 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by Mark A Becker - 10-01-2021, 05:21 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by alonso ramoran - 10-01-2021, 09:44 AM
RE: draft 4: self-similar - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2021, 05:52 PM



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