09-23-2021, 01:23 AM
(09-23-2021, 12:24 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: HA! Very ku reply poem, Tim. Gotta love it!Cool. Might I suggest a colon after that 3? I was simply reading it as a countdown. People might not be any the wiser, but it would lead them closer to that coincidence and be a fun conceit.
Autumn winds scatter
dry inscribed sycamore leaves
summer’s artifacts.
(With the fall upon us, I just had to write a short one about the autumnal equinox occuring in the eastern US at precisely 3:21pm, since the exact minute changes every year. I just love a cosmic count-down coincidence like that.)
Mark