Loving Friday - edit, title change

[dukealien]

Loving Friday


It’s a perfect Friday
a perfectly ordinary Friday
as if any Friday could be
ordinary

when there’s time for everything
but no time to finish
anything

work is easy
toss it on the stack
for Monday

your silent breathless motionless
nervous afternoon anticipation
makes it impossible
to start on anything
at all

oh, Friday
if there were one day to love
it would be you
but there’s just no time
to resume that romance
now.

original version;

Love Friday


It’s a perfect Friday
a perfectly ordinary Friday
as if any Friday could
be ordinary

there is time for everything
but no time to finish
anything

work is easy
put it on the stack
for Monday

but so hard
impossible to start
any job at all

oh, Friday
if there were a day to love
it would be you
but there’s just no time
to begin a romance now.

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One of the few non-LPiA poems from November (the 12th, to be exact).