Loving Friday - edit, title change

[Mark A Becker]

Hey duke-
Some edits/comments on Love Friday:

Love Friday

It’s a perfect Friday
a perfectly ordinary Friday
as if any Friday could be      moved "be" up to break the line on it
ordinary      that leaves "ordinary" on its own line for emphasis

there is time for everything
but no time to finish
anything      "anything" echoes back to "ordinary" with its own line

work is easy
to put on the stack
for Monday

it's so hard to start      (suggested re-working for this stanza)
any job at all-
oh, Friday

if there were a day to love
it would be you
and it's almost quittin time -
to start romance anew

I thought the poem oughta end on an upbeat note, just to show why you love Friday.