The Flying Kite Syndrome

[CRNDLSM]

A person will have in their possession the most amazing opportunity only to let it go and end up chasing after it until it is no longer visible. Sadly, the law of gravity doesn't apply to dreams. Thats why we see so many stars in the sky; they're a representation of dreams that were abandoned.

Poets go on about metaphor.  'theyre a representation' is too telling, 'sadly' is expressed already through words like 'abandoned', I want to replace it with 'happily or furiously' to see how the tone changes, maybe you need sadly to be clear it's sad.  Thanks for sharing