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[brynmawr1]

this is a piece thats hard to critique - the meaning is yours to exude and accept - 

the only line i didnt follow was - 
“ bone rent and broken” I think youre in this space of conceptual play around road, cars, accidents, life and how it passes on the road ( with or without incident) the wording just wasnt familiar to me - takes away from the piece as it leaves me going “ was that on purpose or am i missing a deeper meaning “ 

Other wise a really nice piece which im sure means more to you then I can imagine -

Hi HH2,

Welcome to the site and thanks for commenting.  Your interpretation is correct.  The line you are referring to might be more clear if I had put "...metal and bone, rent and broken, respectively?"    but that doesn't read very well.  Did you read the previous version?  It is a little more explicit.

best,
bryn