Control
#2
Very effective, and not as simple as it first appears. For example, perhaps it was just the chalk that was red... no. I itch, very faintly, for a different word in place of "carry" but can't say exactly why or what would make an improvement. (And by the way, it could be chalk dust.. no.)
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Control - by Wjames - 06-15-2022, 06:58 AM
RE: Control - by dukealien - 06-15-2022, 10:13 PM
RE: Control - by Torkelburger - 06-22-2022, 01:06 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!