05-22-2010, 09:06 AM
Great feedback WK.
thanks for the grammar points. and your other remarks.
i'll use them when i do an edit this week.
the first danced can def go as can big in the first stanza.
i'll think about the splashing but not sure because here i was going for repetitive.
anyway. thanks again for the good feedback
thanks for the grammar points. and your other remarks.
i'll use them when i do an edit this week.
the first danced can def go as can big in the first stanza.
i'll think about the splashing but not sure because here i was going for repetitive.
anyway. thanks again for the good feedback