02-23-2023, 02:42 PM
(02-23-2023, 03:16 AM)71degrees Wrote: Something primitive,The central thesis of the poem i.e. the thing that goads you into trying something uncomfortable like eating a hot pepper is similar to that which makes you run naked, doesn't convince me. Sure, both can be described as 'primitive' desires to do something mildly adventurous and daring, but the activities and sensations are too dissimilar for the juxtaposition to work.
necessary, about eating
chilli pepper
jalapeños, Serranos
touching tongues,
other parts—
makes you want to tear
clothes, run naked through
rows-and-rows of October corn
S3 in isolation reads well, particularly the endling line.

