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Raging in my mind
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03-02-2023, 07:12 AM
(03-02-2023, 05:14 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: ... gnashing is fun.Also note that this 5-7-5 poem is a senryu (about people), and senryu is often confused with haiku (about nature). Yours actually incorporates a bit of both by using the mind/wind metaphor to compare the wind (nature) with what's going on in your mind (people). I think the gnashing proved to be worth it. You wound up with a good one, Mark |
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Raging in my mind - by brynmawr1 - 02-25-2023, 05:33 AM
RE: Outside - by TranquillityBase - 02-25-2023, 07:02 AM
RE: Outside - by brynmawr1 - 02-26-2023, 12:47 PM
RE: Outside - by Mark A Becker - 02-27-2023, 07:48 AM
RE: Outside - by brynmawr1 - 02-27-2023, 09:05 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit) - by Mark A Becker - 02-28-2023, 02:07 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 03-01-2023, 05:00 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by TranquillityBase - 03-01-2023, 05:14 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by Mark A Becker - 03-02-2023, 02:10 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by brynmawr1 - 03-02-2023, 05:14 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by Mark A Becker - 03-02-2023, 05:51 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by brynmawr1 - 03-02-2023, 06:05 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by Mark A Becker - 03-02-2023, 07:12 AM
RE: In My Mind(edit2) - by brynmawr1 - 03-02-2023, 07:41 AM
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