04-23-2023, 09:10 AM
(04-18-2023, 04:30 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Hi Tim-When we were kids, we always said, "Shitty, Shitty, Bang, Bang" to the girls, then laugh like hell.
The change to 'dark pink' was a good decision.
I stumble at 'hand touches', and wonder if you'd consider a slight change to 'hands touch'?
Unfortunately, I can’t un-think ‘Chitty Chitty Bang Bang’ when I read the title.
That said, I like good short poems like this one.
Mark

