Kiss, Kiss Bang, Bang

[71degrees]

Hi Tim-

The change to 'dark pink' was a good decision.

I stumble at 'hand touches', and wonder if you'd consider a slight change to 'hands touch'?

Unfortunately, I can’t un-think ‘Chitty Chitty Bang Bang’ when I read the title.

That said, I like good short poems like this one.
Mark

When we were kids, we always said, "Shitty, Shitty, Bang, Bang" to the girls, then laugh like hell.