Getting ready for the show

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Peonies rising
upon green stems, slow-motion
fireworks bursting white.

I'd suggest a different title.  This poem is like one of those stop-motion films.  If there was a way to format it differently to maximize that:

Peonies rise
upon green stems
slow-motion
fireworks
bursting white.

Something like that.  Or spread out the lines more.

Anyways, enjoyed studying it.