Getting ready for the show
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(05-11-2023, 12:00 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  Peonies rising
in slow-motion on green stems-
fireworks bursting white.

Makes all the difference.  I thought it was a haiku, and I've heard they shouldn't have a title.  So I'll forget the title.

It's a good 'un.
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Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2023, 12:00 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2023, 02:14 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2023, 02:35 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2023, 04:33 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2023, 06:50 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by busker - 05-17-2023, 09:01 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2023, 10:01 AM



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