Forces of Nature-Edit
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I included the rough draft, hope that’s okay. I thought it might help with critique direction. I just really want to get better, lol.

tight rope trail blazer
dance between the lines
metaphoric
manifestation-
mirrors melding minds
influenced choices
duality divine
balancing act
failing, falling
do your best; rest
you were there all along.


How it’s going:

tight rope army
defend between the lines, 
raid reflections-
guard your marching mirrors.

steel soldiers
breach the eastern barricade
divine division-
fail to fly, fall into fire
prevail in blinded battle.


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Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-17-2023, 12:19 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by TranquillityBase - 05-17-2023, 10:16 PM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-17-2023, 10:32 PM
RE: Forces of Nature - by TranquillityBase - 05-18-2023, 02:48 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 03:25 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 06:12 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 07:40 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 07:42 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 07:51 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 09:58 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 10:04 AM
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RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 10:10 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 10:14 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 10:16 AM
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RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 11:08 AM
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