Forces of Nature-Edit

[galaxitchi]

I included the rough draft, hope that’s okay. I thought it might help with critique direction. I just really want to get better, lol.

tight rope trail blazer
dance between the lines
metaphoric
manifestation-
mirrors melding minds
influenced choices
duality divine
balancing act
failing, falling
do your best; rest
you were there all along.


How it’s going:

tight rope army
defend between the lines, 
raid reflections-
guard your marching mirrors.

steel soldiers
breach the eastern barricade
divine division-
fail to fly, fall into fire
prevail in blinded battle.


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