05-17-2023, 04:33 AM 
	
	
	
		Hi Steve-
I’m a sucker for short poems, and like this one enough to offer one word change:
‘explode’ for ‘rising’
Might give this one more bang for the buck.
Mark
	
	
	
I’m a sucker for short poems, and like this one enough to offer one word change:
‘explode’ for ‘rising’
Might give this one more bang for the buck.
Mark

 

 
