Getting ready for the show
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Hi Steve-
I’m a sucker for short poems, and like this one enough to offer one word change:
‘explode’ for ‘rising’

Might give this one more bang for the buck.
Mark
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Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2023, 12:00 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2023, 02:14 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2023, 04:33 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2023, 06:50 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by busker - 05-17-2023, 09:01 AM
RE: Getting ready for the show - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2023, 10:01 AM



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