Forces of Nature-Edit
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tight rope army
defend the
between the lines,


You KNOW when you do that with the thes, the lattermost the has precedence of Concern/Aeffect



they raid reflections-
guard your marching mirrors.


Consonance is somehow more of a slavelord than Assonance; but marching mirrors raiding



defend duality - divine division


does above; doesn't in this above line defend or divine.

It does in its way, but this blasting of protocol gets stuffy when it offers nothing but the same difference.




fail to fly, fall into fire

strategy test.


The failure to fly is glaring INSECURITY,

The failure to actually fall into fire is what this whole poem is about.

The last line is a Compensation. That C word gets a cap but not a full ones
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Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-17-2023, 12:19 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by TranquillityBase - 05-17-2023, 10:16 PM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-17-2023, 10:32 PM
RE: Forces of Nature - by TranquillityBase - 05-18-2023, 02:48 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 03:25 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 06:12 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 07:40 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 07:42 AM
RE: Forces of Nature - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 07:51 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 09:58 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 10:04 AM
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RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 10:10 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 10:14 AM
RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 10:16 AM
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RE: Forces of Nature-Edit - by galaxitchi - 05-18-2023, 11:08 AM
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