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05-19-2023, 06:10 AM

Rowens reading this again out loud I definitely hear the rhyming as a shrug. A call and response kind of.

I'll definitely keep the rhyming critique in mind next time I write. Thanks for the feedback, it been good to practice writing again

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Public Spaces - by Bunx - 05-19-2023, 04:58 AM

RE: Invisible, Man! - by rowens - 05-19-2023, 06:01 AM

RE: Public Spaces - by Bunx - 05-19-2023, 06:10 AM

RE: Public Spaces - by TranquillityBase - 05-21-2023, 09:58 PM

RE: Public Spaces - by Bunx - 06-02-2023, 01:52 AM

RE: Public Spaces - by Bunx - 06-02-2023, 06:15 AM

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