Wristwatch (edit3)

[brynmawr1]

edit2;

Wristwatch
 

Left it lying on the dresser
curled face-down
spider waiting
for its chance to tangle me
in its web of sticky time.

Missed its weight in minutes 
looped it back in place --
caught up again.

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Thanks for all the good critique.  Though some lines were liked, I'm leaning toward radical simplification in hopes that ambiguity will substitute beneficially for detail.

Hi Duke,

I like the edits.  Only one suggestion for the end, might give you that ambiguity you are looking for.
bryn