06-13-2023, 09:07 PM 
	
	
	
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Hi duke,
like the latest revision. 
Might you go a bit further still?
Wristwatch
lying face-down
on the dresser
curled spider 
waiting for its chance
to tangle me
in your web 
of sticky time.
Missed its weight in minutes
looped it back in place
caught up again. I wonder if you still need these? I think the implication that N will be 'caught up again' is pretty strong.
Best, Knot
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